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I have little to say of poetry, save this:

The poet is bound by his verse, with only the divine reigning supreme above him!

THE SNOW THAT KEPT MY NAME

THE SNOW THAT KEPT MY NAME

by Al Konda

There are certain moments in winter when the world feels strangely attentive —

as if it pauses, looks your way, and recognizes something in you

that you didn’t realize was visible.

Today’s poem came from that feeling.

I imagined a child stepping into the quiet before dawn,

when snow still carries the blue light of night

and every sound seems softer than it should be.

He doesn’t call out.

He doesn’t make a wish.

He simply whispers something small into the air —

a thought too honest to keep inside.

And somehow, the snow listens.

I think that’s what touched me most as I wrote this piece:

the idea that the world can lean toward you

when you are gentle enough to meet it halfway.

The glowing snowflake on the child’s sleeve —

that moment is the heart of the poem for me.

It’s fragile, fleeting, gone in seconds…

and yet it leaves behind a warmth that feels almost like recognition.

We all have moments like that, even as adults.

Moments where something tiny confirms that we are seen —

a quiet kindness,

a breath of stillness,

a small softness in the day

that reminds us we still matter in the larger, colder landscape around us.

The poem’s last lines speak to that very truth:

that winter, of all seasons,

is often the one that hears the quietest part of us.

And perhaps that’s why I love writing these Winter Child pieces so much.

They are not grand stories.

They are invitations —

to notice,

to feel,

to slow down just enough

for something delicate to reach you.

Thank you for reading, for feeling with me,

and for carrying your own softness through the cold.

Read the full poem and analysis tomorrow 28th: https://alkonda.com/2025/12/28/the-poem-of-the-day-77/

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