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What Still Remains

What Still Remains

by Al Konda

I wrote this poem from a place that doesn’t get talked about very often — the place where love is still real, but staying is no longer the most honest thing you can do.

What Still Remains is not a poem about giving up. It’s a poem about refusing to turn love into possession.

Sometimes we love fiercely and well. We tend the small, unspoken things. We carry fears that aren’t ours. We try to become shelter, mercy, and home all at once. And sometimes, without meaning to, that care begins to tighten.

There’s a moment when love has to ask itself a hard question:

Am I nourishing this, or am I holding it too tightly?

This poem doesn’t answer that question with certainty. It simply listens to what happens when staying becomes an act of fear rather than truth.

The leaving here isn’t dramatic. It isn’t brave or triumphant. It’s described as gravity — something that pulls without malice. The pain that follows is real. Being called back hurts. Being named a fault hurts. The poem doesn’t pretend otherwise.

But it also insists on something quieter and harder to accept: that love doesn’t disappear just because distance appears.

What mattered doesn’t suddenly become a lie.

What was given doesn’t evaporate.

Tenderness doesn’t erase itself because bodies move apart.

Some loves don’t end cleanly.

They don’t resolve into closure or clarity.

They simply change shape.

And sometimes, what remains — the care, the honesty, the unwillingness to rewrite the truth — is the most faithful part of love we ever manage.

Read the full poem and analysis tomorrow 23rd: https://alkonda.com/2026/01/23/what-still-remains/

© Al Konda · The Poetry Elite

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